Written for porn_battle, for the prompt: Fermet/Czeslaw, the mental torture is worse than the physical
Baccano! Fermet/Czeslaw. NC-17. 250 words. Non-con. Underaged. Torture.
Nerves were simple things, they turned on and off, and pleasure and pain were not so different when pushed to the very extreme.
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Czeslaw used to try to gauge the pain, before he had died enough times to realise that Fermet wasn’t going to stop. He’s not sure when he gave up. Nerves were simple things, they turned on and off, and pleasure and pain were not so different when pushed to the very extreme. It hurt, the things Fermet did to him, and that was all that Czeslaw knew.
“Again, Czes?” Fermet asked. “Shall we play some more?”
Fermet lifted Czeslaw’s penis with the flat edge of a knife. The blade had been glowing red when Fermet last touched him with it, driven it into his belly and pulled his guts out steaming and sizzling.
Fermet had done it after he’d come. “Shh,” he’d said, mouth smiling around Czeslaw’s seizing prick and Czeslaw remembered the iron smell of the knife as it heated in the brazier. “This feels good, right? See, I can still make you feel good.”
Czeslaw squirmed as Fermet kissed it hard again, made promises Czeslaw couldn’t hope he’d keep. Czeslaw didn’t have to watch, but he couldn’t keep still. The chains at his wrist rattled, scraping the skin raw with new wounds that would never scar.
Helpless, he blinked away tears when Fermet kissed the inside of his thigh, and the shape of Fermet’s smile pressed to his skin was sharper and more painful than the scrape of the knife on his ribs.
“A few more experiments,” Fermet said, deciding for them both. “It’ll feel good again soon.”
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End
am blushing so hard yet laughing at my self l///l
Oh lord have mracy. Good God whats worng with you?
Rather than be pedantic or delete your comment, I’ll explain my thoughts behind this: The way Fermet treats Csezlaw breaks my heart. To imagine he’d go so far as to sexually torture him as well, breaks my heart even more. What I enjoy about this situation is the thought that Csez lives through it, survives, and ultimately becomes something resembling whole again at the end of the series. Read from that what you will.
Uh, yeah I mad that you even post up this story! This is sick! And Czeslaw doesn’t even become close to whole at the end at the series! Like Oh my god! And why are getting into the character’s like back thingy. If you were smart, I ment how you wrote it dumb ass! “Fermet had done it after he’d come. “Shh,” he’d said, mouth smiling around Czeslaw’s seizing prick and Czeslaw remembered the iron smell of the knife as it heated in the brazier. “This feels good, right? See, I can still make you feel good.” What the hell is that! I am going to tell you, a freaking pedo that’s what I see!
You know, I initially responded politely to this, but here you go: Fuck off and go troll someone else’s website where you can perv over the two explicit sentences in a story that has nothing to do with being erotic or celebrating abuse.