http://destiny.ponderosa121.com/headfirst/ What the toll tells... Fri, 03 Feb 2012 06:13:08 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 http://destiny.ponderosa121.com/headfirst/comment-page-1/#comment-10127 Maika Wed, 23 Feb 2011 18:43:39 +0000 http://destiny.ponderosa121.com/headfirst/#comment-10127 WOW It was Precious!!! You did quite well describing the feeling that may flow into each own. And your Jack is SO wright, so toruougly HE. I'm gaping. Very good work, indeed. Just one thing: when I read the Prase: "He found her quickly enough" I was preparing me to laugh, thinking you have positioned Elisabeth behind them Sneaking... so I feel a little disapointed. I think this way could be have worked better even. But, it's just one reader's opinion, so... Again good work P.S: Have you any more fic in this line? I'M eager to read it if it is. PSS: Forgive my bad english, I'm from Europe, Spain, so ... Improving my english reading a lot (the truth is taht I do it 'cause I enjoy it thougly. one kiss, big enought for you to keep on working: MAIKA. WOW
It was Precious!!!
You did quite well describing the feeling that may flow into each own.
And your Jack is SO wright, so toruougly HE.
I’m gaping.
Very good work, indeed.
Just one thing: when I read the Prase: “He found her quickly enough” I was preparing me to laugh, thinking you have positioned Elisabeth behind them Sneaking… so I feel a little disapointed. I think this way could be have worked better even. But, it’s just one reader’s opinion, so…
Again good work
P.S: Have you any more fic in this line? I’M eager to read it if it is.
PSS: Forgive my bad english, I’m from Europe, Spain, so … Improving my english reading a lot (the truth is taht I do it ’cause I enjoy it thougly.
one kiss, big enought for you to keep on working:
MAIKA.

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